Tag Archives: writing advice

24 – Beginnings

Daystar and Alexander discuss the beginnings of stories, and what goes into an effective or boring start.

Co-hosted by Alexander Wales

With thanks to Tim Yarbrough for the Intro/Outro music, G.A.T.O Must Be Respected

Links

Name of the Wind

Discworld

Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy

Seveneves

The Stand

Mother of Learning

Timestamps

0:35 What’s in a Beginning?

5:00 Two Types of Prologues

9:15 The Third Type of Prologue

17:16 So what, if it works?

20:01 How to make the beginning engaging

30:08 Beginnings We’ve Enjoyed

35:10 Setting Tone

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23 – The Force Awakens vs Rogue One

This week, Daystar and Alexander do their first review by comparing the various rationalities and irrationalities of Star Wars: The Force Awakens and Rogue One, along with general things they liked and disliked about the movies.

Co-hosted by Alexander Wales

With thanks to Tim Yarbrough for the Intro/Outro music, G.A.T.O Must Be Respected

Links

Instruments of Destruction, by Alexander Wales

The Death Star Architect Speaks Out

22 – Bottom Up Storytelling

Alexander and Daystar discuss Bottom Up Storytelling, bring up common pitfalls to avoid, and explore some homespun examples.

Co-hosted by Alexander Wales

With thanks to Tim Yarbrough for the Intro/Outro music, G.A.T.O Must Be Respected

Links

QNTM

Shadows of the Limelight

Timestamps

00:35 Top Down vs Bottom Up

08:24 Natural Stories in Premises

11:06 Pitfalls in Bottom Up

24:20 Homespun Examples

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21 – Top Down Storytelling

Daystar and Alexander discuss how authors explore social and political systems through top-down storytelling.

Co-hosted by Alexander Wales

With thanks to Tim Yarbrough for the Intro/Outro music, G.A.T.O Must Be Respected

Links

Farenheight 451 by Ray Bradbury

Brave New World by Aldous Huxley

Avatar, aka Ferngully, Part 2

In Time

District 9

Elysium

X-Men 2

Anita Blake, by Laurall K. Hamilton

Minority Report, by Phillip K. Dick

Cat’s Cradle, by Kurt Vonnegut

Two Year Emperor by Eaglejarl

Timestamps

0:25 Top Down World Building

2:29 Science Fiction for Social Commentary

18:41 Top-Down Writing in Our Work

25:30 Fitting Story to Genre

33:28 Tips for Top-Down

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20 – Religion in Fiction

Daystar and Alexander discuss the common pitfalls and problems surrounding religious beliefs in fiction, and how to avoid mistakes that can turn off readers, whether religious or not.

Co-hosted by Alexander Wales

With thanks to Tim Yarbrough for the Intro/Outro music, G.A.T.O Must Be Respected

Links

The Stand and IT by Stephen King

Anita Blake series by Laurel K. Hamilton

Left Behind review blog

Unsong by Scott Alexander

Perelandra by C. S. Lewis

American Gods by Neil Gaiman

Good Omens by Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett

Small Gods by Terry Pratchett

Dresden Files by Jim Butcher

His Dark Materials by Phillip Pullman

Timestamps

00:31 Personal Backgrounds

05:52 Religion in Fiction

10:05 Real Religions vs Fictional Religions

13:28 Religious or Atheist Strawmen

23:19 The Role of Faith

27:24 The Problem with an Afterlife

31:13 Do’s and Dont’s

40:49 Examples

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19 – Exposition

Daystar and Alexander discuss exposition: the good, the bad, and the common pitfalls.

Co-hosted by Alexander Wales

With thanks to Tim Yarbrough for the Intro/Outro music, G.A.T.O Must Be Respected

Links

The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson

Ocean’s Eleven

Cryptonomicon and Snow Crash by Neal Stephenson

Ra by Sam Hughes

The Nightmare Stacks by Charles Stross

Lullaby by Chuck Palahnuik

Quote about narrative flow through sentence structure.

Timestamps

0:45 Exposition vs Narrative

4:38 Bad Exposition

17:00 Exposition as Story Character

18:22 Exposition Timing

24:30 Good Exposition

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18 – Writer’s Block (Guest: Eaglejarl)

Special guest Eaglejarl joins Daystar and Alexander to discuss their experiences of the dreaded writer’s block, including ways to avoid and get through it.

Co-hosted by Alexander Wales

With thanks to Tim Yarbrough for the Intro/Outro music, G.A.T.O Must Be Respected

Links

Two Year Emperor, and other assorted works, by Eaglejarl

Team Anko, Naruto fanfiction by Eaglejarl

Tinker’s Daughter, by Eaglejarl

Marked For Death, by Eaglejarl, Velorien, AugSphere, and Jackercracks

Instruments of Destruction, by AlexanderWales

Novelizing Tabletop Games

Under the Dome and The Stand, by Stephen King

Timestamps

00:52 How does Writer’s Block manifest for you?

9:07 Avoiding Writer’s Block

20:15 Getting out of Writer’s Block

27:20: Everyone dies

17 – Serial Fiction, Part 2

Daystar and Alexander finish discussing serial fiction, namely, chapter length, serial structure, and the need for continuous character growth and new conflicts.

Co-hosted by Alexander Wales

With thanks to Tim Yarbrough for the Intro/Outro music, G.A.T.O Must Be Respected

Links

Worm, by Wildbow

The Dresden Files, by Jim Butcher

Percy Jackson, by  Rick Riordan

Timestamps

00:34 Chapter Length

03:56 Overall Length

6:18 Dangers of Stretching Stories Out

10:06 Serial Structure

12:33 Continuous Character Growth

17:23 Continuous New Conflicts

Transcript of Post-Outro Message

Hey everyone, no book recommendation this week, just a state of the union for the podcast. We’ve enjoyed doing it a lot, and so far the feedback has been pretty great. Over the past month we’ve been consistently getting over 2000 combined downloads and plays per episode, which is awesome, especially since it’s in the ballpark of numbers where advertisers start to pay attention.

Now, ideally I’d like to keep the podcast as ad-free as possible. That’s why we decided to only put the Audible ads after the outro music and pair them with a relevant book recommendation. Unfortunately, over the past few months since we started advertising, we haven’t had a single referral with them yet.

Which is totally okay! I kind of figured that Audible would be an oversaturated market to advertise for, considering our audience. But on the off-chance any of you haven’t signed up for it thanks to one of the other podcasts you listen to, or just from your own personal use, I just want to reiterate that it’s a free 30 day trial that you can cancel at any time, and it gives you a free book credit you can use on whatever you want. You keep the audiobook even if you cancel the subscription right afterward, and not having a subscription doesn’t stop you from using audible as a store and listening app. But even a quick sign up and cancellation supports the show, and helps turn this passion project from a time and money sink into just a time sink. So if you can spare the time and haven’t signed up for Audible before, it would be greatly appreciated.

If you already have an Audible account, but want to support the show in other ways, fear not. We have links in our shownotes for most of the stories and movies that we mention in the episodes. If they’re available on amazon, clicking the links there will take you to the site through our affiliate ID, which makes us a bit of commission each time you buy something in that session. It’s not much, so far the two of us could split a soda if we ever meet up and want to cash in on the affiliate commission, but it’s still a great morale boost to see people enjoying the podcast enough to look into the things we talk about.

And finally, if you don’t have any spare money to buy new books and already have an audible account, you can help us out by sharing the podcast with reader or writer friends and family you think might enjoy it. It’s a niche audience, to be sure, but the best way the community can grow is by exposure. And if you have an iTunes account, a review on there would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks again for listening, and to our patrons, thank you for your continued support.

16 – Serial Fiction, Part 1

Daystar and Alexander discuss serial fiction’s history, pros and cons, and how to navigate scheduling.

Co-hosted by Alexander Wales

With thanks to Tim Yarbrough for the Intro/Outro music, G.A.T.O Must Be Respected

Links

We’re Alive

The Green Mile, by Stephen King

John Dies at the End, by David Wong

 The Martian, by Andy Weird

Timestamps

0:45 Features and History

10:30 Pros

15:31 Cons

18:14 Transitioning to Publishing

21:00 Scheduling

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15 – Multiverse

Daystar and Alexander explore the different types of Multiverse stories, and how to make them compelling and rational.

Co-hosted by Alexander Wales

With thanks to Tim Yarbrough for the Intro/Outro music, G.A.T.O Must Be Respected

Links

Sliders

The Merchant Princes, by Charles Stross

Two Year Emperor, by Eaglejarl

The One

Fringe

Rick and Morty

The Dark Tower by Stephen King

Demon by Jason Shiga

The Last Action Hero

Timestamps

0:40 Why we enjoy multiverses

5:54 Types of multiverse stories

10:58 Realism of multiverse stories

16:16 Multiverse and Fanfiction

19:53 Bound vs Unbound Multiverses

34:22 Writing Multiverse Stories well

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Daystar recommends The Dark Tower Series, specifically The Drawing of the Three in today’s post-outro Audible advertisement.

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